November 24th, 2011, 11:11 am

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dreadelion November 24th, 2011, 11:11 am

still... having issues with how to draw this piece of poop ):

do any of you have anything to say?

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Forbidden_Requiem November 24th, 2011, 11:57 am

look mah! no clothes

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wellpent (Guest) November 24th, 2011, 2:59 pm

I like your artwork, but if you're still not sure about it yourself, I'd suggest experimenting. Just go with the flow, do what feels right for each page, and eventually you'll find elements that you can mash together and be proud of. I don't know about your other readers, but I'd sure love to see you having fun and just going nuts with the art, haha. Don't pressure yourself though-- you'll figure it out! <3

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Guest, yo. (Guest) November 24th, 2011, 4:37 pm

Well, I am not an expert (or even a novice) when it comes to art, but if you're asking for opinions then I'd be happy to give mine, even if it's not very helpful.

Personally, my favorite pages (stylistically, at least) are 16-18, and my least favorite pages are from 21-22. There are several reasons for this.

First, I really like the dark, thick lines on pages 16-18. The two most recent pages have had lighter, thinner lines, and I don't like the effect as much. Also, on the previous pages you seemed to be using a lot more black, and I liked that look. For example, if you compare the pot that Ilya (that is his name, right?) is hiding behind on page 18 to the same pot on page 22, I think the former looks a lot more visually interesting because of the darker lines and the higher level of contrast between dark and light. Also, I liked how you would sometimes surround someone with a white line when they were against a darker background (take, for example, Witchdoctor on the last panel of page 17), but on the most recent two pages you don't seem to be doing that.

But, in the end, it's your comic, and you should do what you want to with it. Those were just my opinions, not yours. Draw it however you want to. Overall, I think it's fun to read no matter how you decide to do it.